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Quiet Echoes
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Quiet Echoes
How silent the graveyard
Serene the grassy field
Tho monuments of the past
A wealth of information they yield
As I walk by
I try to imagine their dreams
Their hopes, their fears
Its not as hard as it seems
I imagine them living
Not yet concerned with death
Full of lifes expectations
Same as all who draw breath
A young man who loved Ellie
Someday hoped to make her his bride
Sent off to war
On a distant shore died
Grandma Anita Givins
Of whose wisdom they still speak
Written on her tombstone
Blessed are the meek
As I muse I remember
My life too has an end
I resolve to be more responsible
With the life I spend
For I too will one day be
A monument in the grass
And perhaps another will ponder
Who I was as they pass
But I will leave a message
Quiet echoes of my stay
Sharing the lesson
I learned along the way
If youre reading this poem
Etched upon my stone
Take comfort friend
Youre not alone
Make the most of your time
Live life to the fullest each day
For the time of your passing
Is not so far away
Russ
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Lone_er
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2003-08-06 08:05:00]
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Re: Quiet Echoes
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:11:15 AM AEST
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| WOW O WOW!!! You have definately written a superb piece here.I believe the same ..that we must make each day count...and count each day..as a blessing *huge smiles* |
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Re: Quiet Echoes
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:50:34 AM AEST
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| wow, russ, this is great, i like reading them too lol, this is very moving and great message too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Quiet Echoes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:28:38 AM AEST
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Great write, Russ...Happy to see you posting again....
Thanks for your very sweet comment on my latest poem..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Quiet Echoes
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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very beautiful, the stories that they tell
Shari |
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Re: Quiet Echoes
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:35:39 PM AEST
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| i too.....survey the serene grassy fields.........this was a beautiful piece..........it brings an odd comfort to a mother to read other children's monument's.........knowing my angel has many friends with her....and i, sadly, am not alone......... |
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