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The world suckz
Contributed by
Dark_angel_babay
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
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I hate the world 2day,
Sometimes I realize it will never change,
I'm so bitter from your childish games,
The world slows down,
And I can't listen anymore,
I'm tired of your *****,
Sometime's I wish you'd die,
I can't seem to breathe,
The cold air hurts my lungs,
And it pangs my sides,
Emptiness is in me,
And death takes over my soul,
I don't care anymore,
My golden heart is made of stone,
Shadows quell where there was once light,
And suddenly I see it,
I'm lost in this mays eve.
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Dark_angel_babay
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2003-08-06 10:45:00]
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Re: The world suckz
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:56:39 AM AEST
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Hey, don't blame me! I keep spinning and feeding all of you people. Besides, you haven't exactly been Ms.Perfect yourself..what's with all of the post consumer waste you've been generating?
Oh..and nice poem..it really had some feeling to it. Almost reminds me of why I created you in the first place.
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Re: The world suckz
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by tweaks2004 on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:42:18 PM AEST
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| id love you to not be so damn morbid shiiiiit ok ok ok im just as bad so what |
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Re: The world suckz
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:51:14 PM AEST
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morbidity abounds my friend
some light to you i send.......... |
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Re: The world suckz
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:36:00 AM AEST
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looooooool , good from u Worls ,heheh , this comment really made me laugh ....
good poem anyway
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Re: The world suckz
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 01:54:01 PM AEST
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| very good...loved it...well done... |
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Re: The world suckz
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by eternityandaday4u on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 02:07:45 AM AEST
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| i am not trying to bash on any one but you make it sound so selfish and self centered! you make it sound like you are the only one that suffers. your heart of gold? you have to realize that it's not the world that sucks it what you make of it! the world and life are not always going to be on your side so deal with it! you are the only one that can make yourself change or feel the way you do. i agree it was morbid and depressing but there are better days and over all it was a pretty good poem! |
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