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The Color of Oblivion
Contributed by
JavaArmy
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Outside the sky is the color of oblivion,
Nightfall, shadows on the walls,
Flickering candles and a computer screen,
Trying to put into words all of the things I think,
But my mind is cold and in a state of desperate disrepair,
And I can't help but feel broken for the way that I treat you sometimes,
Shattered and alone, wondering if one day you'll leave,
God, I just want to hold onto to every fleeting moment,
And I know sometimes that you don't see me cry,
because I just want you to see love in my eyes,
And I feel it ripping at my insides,
But what can I do?
I'm Just sitting here thinking about you,
The same fears repeating,
And I can almost feel your heart beat again,
Torn away, blackened by my own sin,
I can't fall again, I won't fall again,
Because I love you.
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Re: The Color of Oblivion
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:53:34 PM AEST
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Wow this touched me so deeply. I feel the exact same way about a girl I want the best for her and yet i always seem to ***** up and hurt her. This was awesome i love the emotion you poured into this. This was absolutely EXCELLENT. Thnx for sharing and best of luck.
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Re: The Color of Oblivion
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:07:06 AM AEST
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| sometimes even as hard as you try you still **** up and hurt the person you care most about.....sometimes all it's about is getting back to the intention of love.....beautiful read.... |
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