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It Would Be Better To Eat Them Away
Contributed by
2timesX
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Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
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i eat the thoughts and the screams.
you, with your pleading eyes.
a feeble cry escapes those blue lips.
and those haunting features...
those haunting features of a cripple in fear
in fear of a certain power.
vivid imagery and a high shrieking volume.
now you see,
you realise the catastrophe of your thoughts.
eat them away.
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2003-08-08 03:05:00]
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Re: It Would Be Better To Eat Them Away
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 04:57:37 AM AEST
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random thoughts, but vivid imagery
Shari |
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Re: It Would Be Better To Eat Them Away
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:21:53 PM AEST
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was a good read, pity thoughts cant be eaten away leaving an emotionless shell, as is life.
But with a few words you have nailed down a vivd picture.
Keep it up. |
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