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AUGMENTATION
Contributed by
jaeann
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Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Violate the body rip away the soul make sure the work's not shoddy leaving you un-whole.
Reasearch all the questions write down all the lies of all the many bastions how many inside have died?
Change the body given you raped of all your will erase the past so old to rue new life for you instilled.
Come home branded forever your soul's in lost and found its' search is your endeavor new violations over the hill abound.
Words and violence penetrate the walls you thought were there for keeps even new little fools can fall sin sows and then so reaps.
No scars are clearly visible left with no small trace atleast nothing viable you can see behind the lace.
How long it has taken to find her lost soul with all in her life that's been shaken will she ever be whole?
A struggled quest each and every day to simply break free now much stronger she has a say and the light now she can see.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-08 17:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: AUGMENTATION
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 06:03:59 PM AEST (User
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Good poem. I liked it. |
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Re: AUGMENTATION
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 07:52:16 PM AEST (User
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enjoyable write.
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Re: AUGMENTATION
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:38:04 PM AEST (User
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Well written ... interesting poem ... Jan |
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Re: AUGMENTATION
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:30:27 PM AEST (User
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in your writing i have this image you created for me, a person haunting and worldly, wanting to absolve the past. bearing truth
very intriguing image. thats just me, i really like your work. |
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