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It happened one rainy night
Contributed by
ravi
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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It happened one rainy night,
with wind howling with all it's might,
and lightening casting it's eerie light,
on dark trees whipped hard,left and right.
The lonely highway presented a fearsome sight,
It was then I saw this lady,dressed all in white.
A beauty she was,delicate like an unopened flower,
distressed and roadwrecked at an ungodly hour,
a whiff of perfume,a tinge of glamour,
I soon became her knight in shining armour.
And then it happened,that rainy night,
we fell in love at first sight.
The weather being naughty,our hearts turned to sin,
we spend the night romancing at a roadside inn.
I opened my eyes to a glaring morning light,
searching in vain,the mysterious lady in white.
The dumb innkeeper pitied my muddled plight,
flatly denying seeing any lady,last night.
I left the place as a laughing sight,
what bloody happened,on that rainy night ?.
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ravi
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2003-08-11 10:35:00]
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Re: It happened one rainy night
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 12:00:37 PM AEST
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very well written mysterious so many possibilities...lets the imagination wander.
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Re: It happened one rainy night
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:35:34 AM AEST
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Ravi I love this I believe this to be true,wonderful write it captured me.
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Re: It happened one rainy night
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:44:49 AM AEST
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He had sex with a prostitute who woke up early tickled his ear and left only after securing the innkeepers vow he would tell no one. He is now infected with many STD's inclluding HIV, chlamydia, genital herpes, gonorrhea, syphillis, Hepatitis B, and epididtymis. How did the local people confirm this were they peeking through the window? Those are my thoughts...
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Re: It happened one rainy night
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:49:55 AM AEST
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yes I enjoy similar symptoms which makes the poem
quite beleivable. Episode after episode have I been
subjected to such lucid dreaming. (wink) |
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Re: It happened one rainy night
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by Ravi on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 09:06:33 AM AEST
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Hi Bob
Thanx for your comment.The local people had said that various other people had seen and experienced the lady in white along that route.Always she used to disappear in a mysterious way without robbing anything. |
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