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from the heart of a young poet
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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my poem is a winning poem
though i left the best to be the last
still awinning p[oem
though i clothe the claw
to pick the clout
still a winning poem
i write for no just sake
but to be known
sometime i handle my pen when no word flows
but write a worthy one
you could sit and flaw in words
you could be at rest and flow in rhymes
this is me from low world
here i'm with no word
still picks my words
struggling to being a good poet
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olasunkanmi
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2003-08-11 13:05:00]
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Re: from the heart of a young poet
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:38:31 AM AEST
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And dear young poet. You are already a good poet! How terribly hard it must be, to write your poetry,
in another language, and still make it sound like it would in your land!
BRAVO to you young poet! This takes courage, and we all know it. Looking forward to that one poem that will put you on top!
Warm love to a young poet
lovingcritters
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Re: from the heart of a young poet
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by olasunkanmi on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 12:48:30 PM AEST
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Thanks a lot you are really wonderful.,
big up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you really act according to your name
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