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Every Thing Of My Life
Contributed by
hot-shot
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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You are every thing of my life;
You are my body,
You are my soul,
You are my heart,
You are my love,
You are my mind,
You are my smile,
You are my happiness,
You are my destiny,
You are my desire,
You are my day,
You are my rest,
You are my night,
You are my sleep,
You are my dream,
But out of these
You are my precious life
Without it I am nothing
Thats mean without you I am incomplete
Like body without soul.
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2003-08-11 14:05:00]
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Re: Every Thing Of My Life
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by Ash on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:37:22 PM AEST
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| You've just proved that it doesn't need to rhyme to be beautfiul. Very moving, I hope she can see how much you love her. |
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Re: Every Thing Of My Life
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by Saira on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:51:32 PM AEST
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This is a lovely and heart warming write. I too hope she gets to know your love so deep for her. Wishing you good luck!
Keep smiling! :o)
Saira |
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Re: Every Thing Of My Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 05:49:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful declaration of love..
Welcome to ypdc...
Jenni |
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Re: Every Thing Of My Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:23:29 PM AEST
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Dear Hot Shot/Zuhaib
this poem is realy a good piece of your thoughts:
i hope u will be capture the heart of tht
beatifull lad:........
who is she is that Sahar-e-Erum or???????????????????????????????????????????????????????.
i Know she still loves you:even more than you
ok bye this is Mubashir rahim abbasi |
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Re: Every Thing Of My Life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:15:34 AM AEST
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hey
no one can steal
SAHAR
from u
"bashi" |
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