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Today
Contributed by
Asatru
on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Today was a great day, Today I saw her beautiful face,
Today was a great day, Today we talked like no one else was there,
Today was a great day, Today she wrote me a note,
Today was a great day, Today she told me she liked me,
Today was a great day, Today I wrote her a poem,
Today was a great day, Today I asked her out,
Today was a bad day, Today she said no,
Today was a bad day, Today I didn't talk,
Today was a bad day, Today I made my friends depressed,
Today was a bad day, Today she told me maybe later,
Today was a bad day, Today she just couldn't tell me never,
Today was a horrible day, Today she started going out with my friend,
Today was alright, Today is the last day I will allow myself to see.
Copyright ©
Asatru
... [
2003-08-11 16:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Today
(User Rating: 1 ) by PsychoticDreamz on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 06:47:39 PM AEST (User
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WoW...This is amazing, I love the repetition..Great write
*_-Psych-_* |
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