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struggle
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
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this daily struggle has led me to my end
i'm feeling worthless and vulnerable
it seems theres never any time to rest
i want to feel more but im afraid im not able
i'm ready to see through your eyes
step through the looking glass
and see me come to realize
that i am exactly what i seem to be on the outside
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Re: struggle
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:35:45 AM AEST
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| oh perfect read!!! i want to feel this way too.....to see what others see...... |
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Re: struggle
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:30:20 AM AEST
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I think you named your poem just right! It truly is a struggle to grow up without a fight!
But in whose eyes must you be right?
Now close yours real tight!
And think of whom you live with day and night?
You, just you!
And when you learn to love you, then you'll love everyone else too! And those that you don't......won't even bother you!
lovingcritters
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Re: struggle
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:15:15 AM AEST
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| this is an excellent write I think, Crow |
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