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Not Invisible
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hey I'm here
I'm not invisible
I'm right here
Just look around
You'll see me
Just listen to me
You'll hear me
I'm screaming
No one will listen
I'm crying
No one will comfort me
Just look down
I'm not invisible
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MnMnMsrcool
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2003-08-11 18:35:00]
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Re: Not Invisible
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:14:15 AM AEST
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That poem wins the top prize. Few words and yet expressed eloquently! Marvelous, and how many times have we all felt invisible! Is there anything more degrading? Sucks the self-esteem from our very souls!
I loved your poem, please do more for us to enjoy! And as you grow older just remember this poem. You can truly learn to comfort yourself indeed!
lovingcritters
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Re: Not Invisible
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by Kimmie_mac on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 08:06:06 AM AEST
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This is great, Short and to the point. I like it.
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