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Final Release
Contributed by
zee
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Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The Final release!
Found All My Wits, gave my last Blow,
Knelt Down at last, let my red ones flow.
All came closer, started feeling like a loser,
Axes flew across, made me feel more bruiser.
All words of heavenly Curses stroked,
Making me ready for the heavenly abode.
Hes a Strong soul, bring the chains they said,
Taking one out they slowly circled my head.
My reflexes got weak, Hands & legs got loose,
So was it felt as if they hunted a wild goose?
Slowly they tightened their grip around in rage,
Started to act dead in hope, as an innocent sage.
Could hear people shouting my death from a mile,
Appears as if I was the enemy of all Some Vile.
Started Getting Cold now slowly from the feet,
Could thank no more them for this Deadly feat.
The entire surplus left was now totally over,
Just waiting For the Will to live to finish over.
Pleading In under to grant me the Final release,
Made my life hell, but let me die with ease
Finally recalled the happy moments peacefully,
And gave my last breath to the earth willfully.
Copyright ©
zee
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2003-08-11 23:05:00]
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Re: Final Release
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:23:36 AM AEST
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wow powerful write here!! I liked this.
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Re: Final Release
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by Katie-Kate on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:01:31 AM AEST
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| i liked it. deep write my friend, nice |
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Re: Final Release
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:22:04 AM AEST
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Welcome Friend. It's good to see you here!
This is a great write with full of striking images. Loved it.
Keep up the good work!
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Re: Final Release
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by Zee on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:33:34 PM AEST
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| Thank U very much for u r Appreciation!! |
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Re: Final Release
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by Zee on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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| Thank uu very much!! |
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Re: Final Release
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by Zee on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:41:39 PM AEST
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| Thank uu very much for u r Appreciation & sincere Guidance. |
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