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Breif Thought
Contributed by
smilinjlo17
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
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although things look peculiar,
in this state of mind,
i see how ignorant some can be,
without others of their kind
people need companions
people needs Foes
some people just need others
that can tell what the other knows
i wish i felt the boundaries
of where your hand touched mine.
i wish i smelt the fire
of how your love was in line.
i cannot see it anymore,
the care, the love, the bliss,
but how do you see me,
if i cannot even feel your kiss.
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2003-08-12 03:35:00]
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Re: Breif Thought
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:44:30 AM AEST
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| an interesting poem... i really like it... cant wait to read more of ur poetry ~Apryl |
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Re: Breif Thought
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:30:09 PM AEST
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| That was very good. Nicely written. Really enjoyed it. |
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