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Your Eyes
Contributed by
Katie-Kate
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Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The tone you used was comforting,
The words were just as sweet,
You almost had me fooled there,
But your eyes couldn't lie in the heat.
They gave away your intentions,
They let me see the real you,
If only I had noticed sooner,
I wouldn't be in love with you.
I was too quick to forgive your actions,
I never questioned why,
I trusted all your motives,
I didn't think that you would lie.
But you screwed me over majorly,
you left me torn in two
I was stupid for not noticing
But I was in love with you.
Copyright ©
Katie-Kate
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2003-08-12 07:35:00]
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Re: Your Eyes
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by garyh on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:53:45 AM AEST
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well... definately not the words i would have used... but i guess thats why we are different..
you have a nice rhythm... and it was very steady all the way through... nice write |
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 09:26:20 AM AEST
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| Good write, very flowing..........Love is believing in someone, unfortunately, there are those who take advantage of that love. Keep writing...........Mike |
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