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It's Taking Me With It
Contributed by
Katie-Kate
on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When I look around
All I see is pain
I thought things were getting better
But you've gone down hill again.
All my friends are unhappy
They all seem to be insane
I try to ignore their beckoning
But resisting is such a strain.
I try not to let myself fall
to the level where they rest
I cling to all the good times
And shut out all the rest.
I am suffocating from the hurt
Resisting such a call
But although i may seem strong to you
I can feel myself start to fall.
Why can't i make it go away
Why can't I make it stop
I want to take their pain away
And make this bull S*** stop.
When I think about their sadness
And think about my own
I regret the love and strong support
I haven't always shown.
I should try to be there more for them
Try to share their pain
Try to give life back to them
So we all can live the same.
I am losing control of life
I am losing control of my mind
Relief only comes in daylight hours
When a destraction is easy to find.
My thoughts cannot be left alone
They wander off too far
But i can brink them back to sanity.
Well I've been able to so far.
When the night hours come
And I've nothing left to do
I start to lose my mind again
I don't know what I'll do.
I'm slowly going over the edge
Feeling the end is near
But I can't give up on all my friends
I want them to know I'm here.
I want them to be able to rely on me
I need a reason to live
The satisfaction is only reached
When there's something I can give.
But what if they don't need me
What if they get well
What will I do with my life then?
Only time will tell.
Copyright ©
Katie-Kate
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2003-08-12 08:35:00]
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Re: It's Taking Me With It
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by Zee on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 05:07:46 PM AEST
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Brilliant write, Warm feelings for u r friends.
Good work!!! |
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Re: It's Taking Me With It
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by Kimmie_mac on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 02:50:47 AM AEST
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| This is great. Wonderful. Kimmie_mac |
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