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Sad and Gone
Contributed by
lilsk8ergurl9
on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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I lay here and wonder,
As I lay here and not speak.
It seems to get harder,
As I seem to get weak.
Im on a mission,
I have to fight.
Win or lose,
Its my life.
Day by Day,
I go on.
Finding words to say,
But my mind has gone.
Acting ok,
But not alright.
Losing my mind,
Its out of sight.
Now I lay here and wonder,
As I lay here and not speak.
I have lost the fight,
Its No longer me you see.
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lilsk8ergurl9
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2003-08-12 13:35:00]
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Re: Sad and Gone
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is an inspired poem. It speaks depth and innocence shattered. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Sad and Gone
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by BlackFire9786 on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:08:07 PM AEST
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Wow, a sad write, but so well written i loved it. I can relate to this poem. Great write
Lisa |
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Re: Sad and Gone
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by lilsk8ergurl9 on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:05:25 PM AEST
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| thnk u so much for the compliments. it is really freatly appricated. |
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Re: Sad and Gone
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by lilsk8ergurl9 on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:14:29 PM AEST
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| thank you for the compliment.. its appricated much.just good to know that someone else can relate to it as much as i can. |
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