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Fireflies Dance
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
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Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when i see the fireflies dance lighting up gracefully in oh so perfect moments you will always come to mind and the first night i caught a glimpse of their light the way we talked for much too long and how i hungered for your kiss knowing you were much too special just to let you slip away i tried to tell you how i felt it fell from my lips in jumbles nervous i instantaneously became so i began to withdraw my claim but it was too late already you knew what i wanted.. was you
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Re: Fireflies Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by NikkiMNelson on
Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:57:24 PM AEST (User
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That was so beautiful!!! Write More Plz!!!!
!!*!!nIkkI!!*!! |
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Re: Fireflies Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 01:10:48 AM AEST (User
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its nice to see another firefly lover here!This poem is delightful and vivid, nice job.
michelle |
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