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Dark

Contributed by CrimsonTearz on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The room is empty
The walls are closing in
My eyes are red
Tears are flowing
Blood is dripping

I take in my last breath
All I see is black
Like the empty space inside of me
Death is the only answer
Nothing else will cure this pain

Life is not important
Nothing here for me
The pain is overbearing
I can't conceal how I feel
I let the tears flow

The walls close in
Tears stop flowing
As life ends
I see nothing
I hear my shallow breathing

Life is ending
The pain is gone
No more tears
No more blood




Copyright © CrimsonTearz ... [ 2003-08-14 18:05:00]
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Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by vince on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 06:31:43 PM AEST
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nice poem for a 11 years old ... keep goin


Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:50:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC Friend!
This is sad but a very good write...especially for a 11 years old. Keep up the good work!
Saira


Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 05:16:16 AM AEST
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you wrote this when you were eleven ........profound darkness emanates from your work......welcome.....i look forward to more.....i hope there's light now where you are........


Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:25:38 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, a well done poem.
Darkness radiates from it, it held me from beginnig to end, I liked this poem, keep it up.


Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Nsa on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 10:04:50 PM AEST
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Better comments than any of the ones I get lol. Well, it is a pretty good poem, and excellent for a little pipsqueak 11 year old




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