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As The Music Fades...
Contributed by
Lost4EvEr1541
on
Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The music keeps skipping
jumping back a second
or ahead a few
Kind of like my mind
One memory
Stuck, spinning in circles
Can't hear the real music
but just the mistakes
in the songs
Mistakes keep repeating
Good times just ahead
waiting to be forgotten
And when you finally think the song is over
It jumps again
It's never ending
Finally the song is over
Just like my life.
After a life full of mistakes
and a broken record
it just ends.
Sorry i ruined your hopes
Thank you, you ruined my life.
Listen to the music...
It may tell you something.
Copyright ©
Lost4EvEr1541
... [
2003-08-14 23:45:00]
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Re: As The Music Fades...
(User Rating: 1 )
by noone on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:41:09 PM AEST
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I like this poem. It made me think about some things. It is really good, please keep writing!
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Re: As The Music Fades...
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by Alphas0z on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 11:16:20 AM AEST
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It's a beautiful poem.
I liked it, although it didn't make sense to me, but that may be that i'm young. |
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