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my babys a man
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
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my babys a man
with whiskers on his chin
he's going on six feet tall
he has a beautiful grin,
this month we shared
now comes to an end
he goes back to acadamy
but him i dont want to send,
i loved every minute
this month flew away
but we will have time
another happy laughing day,
micks going to be a pilot
he said,'mom someday ill take you anywhere'
okay son, just always know the door is open
and about how much i love you and care
once more away from me
first i have to watch him fly
tomorrow morning he gets on a plane
and takes my heart with him into that sky
these tears in my eyes..
i wish i could stop time..
i love him so dearly..
thus this lill rhyme..
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Re: my babys a man
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 01:57:30 AM AEST
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Awwww!!! This is BEAUTIFUL!!! :D
~ Moonlit |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Stalkee on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 02:09:41 AM AEST
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| oh wow! this was a great poem, a very unique poem, it has sadness in the time flew so fast, but also happiness in the memories you two created.....it has sorrow when he had to leave, but also a lot of hope and anticipation, knowing and waiting that youll see eachother again....this didnt make any sense did it lol....but what im TRYING to say is: great write, i loved it =) |
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Re: my babys a man
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by PoloRM on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 02:12:23 AM AEST
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| That's so lovely and sweet! Beautiful write, straight from the heart! |
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Re: my babys a man
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by venkat on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 02:59:12 AM AEST
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A very good write..these lines are very nice.."micks going to be a pilot
he said,'mom someday ill take you anywhere'
okay son, just always know the door is open
and about how much i love you and care"..
best of luck.. venkat
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Re: my babys a man
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by blueheart on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 03:52:57 AM AEST
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| Really sweet. :) |
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Re: my babys a man
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 05:14:07 AM AEST
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awwwwww come on.**hugs her sister* Mick is never far away...every breath you take..holds the whispers of his soul...he was once inside you...growing....being nurtured...it is still the same...he is still inside you....and he is still being nurtured by your heart while growing into a man....a man you can stand there and be very proud of..like I know you are. *silly kentucky woman...dry those tears and crack the champagne lol*
All the best to you Mick....fly safe and CALL YOUR MOM!!! ;) ...OFTEN. :)*whispers*.....she loves ya a whole bunch..you know that?? ...
Beautiful Nessa (((huggers))) |
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Re: my babys a man
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by cant-skate on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 07:07:07 AM AEST
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| nicely wirtten ! good poem ! |
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Re: my babys a man
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 09:23:02 AM AEST
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this is beatiful Nessa, your a caring wonderful mom and I know what a good job you did raising this son your sending him into the world, a pilot?very impressive. He loves you and will miss you just as much.Hugs sweet friend.If needed pm me.
Ill cheer you up with another ranch animal furbaby picture when i get home lol.
michelle |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 11:10:13 AM AEST
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He may be a man but always your "baby",
allowing him to soar is what makes you such a beautiful lady. Though he may not be in your arms to comfort and to hold,he'll be with you everyday,as the day will unfold!
With all my love and wishes too,the best to mick...and big hugs for you!!! 0:-)
Angel always....joni |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:00:58 AM AEST
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Awww Nessa,
This is beautiful, just like your heart, Mick is turning out to be a fine young man, but even when he's old and grey he'll still be your baby...
Never say goodbye, always see you later, dont cry because he's 'gone' but smile because he will one day return |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:31:43 AM AEST
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Awwww.. I know how much the past month has meant to you.... I'm glad you enjoyed it and I know your Mick enjoyed it too... Cherish the time that you had...and look forward to the next time you'll be together.
Love ya, grrlfriend... (((((((((Nessa))))))))) |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 03:09:29 AM AEST
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Nessa, an excellent portrayal of the joys and sadness in life.
"You can't have one without the other"
bob |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Fwog on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 07:40:06 PM AEST
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G'day Nessa!
Wow that must have been a wonderful month
Mick would have had such a time just being near his beautiful mom.
So glad for you my friend and so well expressed in this write of yours.
Love reading and sharing your thoughts and words again.
Hugz
Fwog
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Re: my babys a man
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by POOBEAR on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 08:12:57 PM AEST
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Oh Dear Nessa,
I had tears of happiness in my eyes
for you. I too loved what he said to you
"mom someday I'll take you anywhere".
You must be so proud.
Love,
POOBEAR |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 08:18:32 PM AEST
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I totally hear you - mom to mom - lol
I have a grown son also - love him more than I love my life - he is a wonderful man
un beso
merry |
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Re: my babys a man
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:47:46 AM AEST
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This one really got to me Nessa. It's very poignant. I am forever telling my sons (much to their distress) "No matter how big you get, no matter how old you are... you will ALWAYS be my baby". *sniff*
It's a beautiful and touching write.
~T |
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