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2 Years of Waste
Contributed by
Marco
on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought you cared - even when it's over
watching you teared - another scare from you
pushed you away - as the memorys tend to stay
the feelings will fade - evolve into you will stay
*I thought you cared about me truly*
*I don't feel a thing between us*
You showed me love - i'm affraid it's over
the gentle touch - warmth would pass through us
You never cared - cold hearted selflessness
come watch me die - as i did this for you
*I thought you cared about me truly*
*I don't feel a thing between us*
- You did'nt care, you never showed -
- what's inside me, i loved you.... but it's over -
I know you out there - i feel heart broken
Why feeling down - did you lose another
We sharded a kiss - it stays with the kiss
love turned insane - your lost within my eyes
I FEEL IT WITHIN US!!!!
Copyright ©
Marco
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2003-08-15 13:05:00]
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Re: 2 Years of Waste
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jessica_Saini on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 01:24:30 PM AEST
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This would make an awesome rock song. Great write!
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Re: 2 Years of Waste
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by Saira on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. I liked the repeated lines. Good work!
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