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The Last Battle
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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He might tell you of the hardened
life he had.
The pain, the suffering
the wars he had lived through.
May I speak of the children?
beautiful now, the thought he held.
A hard fought battle again.
Seventy in years, a frail man
lies in the street, blood on his lips.
The last hard battle done.
There are tears in my eyes knowing this,
as I gather the frail man`s scattered gifts.
Fate passing through on its deadly run,
or God`s hands at work again.
A bitter cold wind blows not in the night,
but somewhere inside me.... Crow
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2003-08-15 15:05:00]
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 03:46:55 PM AEST
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again with so few words you tug at my heart, so very well written
Shari |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:01:32 PM AEST
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No need to question your God, Crow...
for with bad things he just won't know....
He is kind, and loving and understanding too
He loved that old man just like you.....
Time and unforeseen occurances befall us all.....It wasn't your God that let. him fall....
He was old and frail.....and and his age was old.......unforeseen occurrence was befall.
'Twill happen to us all!
Loving your beautiful poems, Crow.
lovingcritters
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Crow on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:15:22 PM AEST
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thank you connie, I get rung-out sometimes
Crow
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Crow on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:18:15 PM AEST
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| thank you Shari, somethings tear in to me. Crow |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:26:59 PM AEST
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| Your words move the very soul my friend....such depth of emotion...very well done! Larry |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Crow on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 10:50:08 PM AEST
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| thank you Larry, that piece you posted is a favorite of mine. Crow |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 02:48:32 AM AEST
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we were having a God Satan and Why conversation here today as well. This is so sad and touching grow and to see these things does make a person have a question I know the cold wind feeling as you do .Great job on this poem.
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Re: The Last Battle
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 02:49:03 AM AEST
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we were having a God Satan and Why conversation here today as well. This is so sad and touching Crow and to see these things does make a person have a question I know the cold wind feeling as you do .Great job on this poem.
michelle |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:24:17 AM AEST
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| For me...to question is to believe..... :) I know you have faith...its just that you feel everything that is.You move me endlessly with your words...feelings...thoughts...ways. |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:36:07 PM AEST
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that bitter cold.....comes swiftly around the corner.........in the dead of night......
the old spirit had an angel near his passing.......to guide his way through........stand proud.......... |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Crow on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:04:25 AM AEST
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these things make me stand each morning
into the sun and prepare. every sense you have could be taken that day, makes me aware of my own mortality. how small I am
Crow |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Crow on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:11:56 AM AEST
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| this stuff drains me a bit, you get that bitterness in you. thank you shelby for taking a peek. Crow |
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Re: The Last Battle
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by Crow on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:31:51 AM AEST
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| thats the thought I like to keep, thank you jaeann |
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