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AGONY INSIDE ME
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
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Dusting through the years This pain I endure inside Forever yonders Beneathe the blurry sea Speads across the distance Dividing the individuals amongst us Seeking our reflection Hiding what we truly feel inside Engaged with saddness and Our moral ways Covered in this deep blue water With crescent blood It lursts though Bleeding black as the black Night sky appears upon us Forever alone and dead Roaming around this tainted blood Crawling with miseries and mysteries Attracted with darkness and across the Cracked wall....
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2003-08-15 18:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: AGONY INSIDE ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 07:37:09 PM AEST (User
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I loved this very poetic and well written
Engaged with saddness and
Our moral ways
I loved those two lines not to sure why, but I hope u feel better soon.
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Re: AGONY INSIDE ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST (User
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Good write, keep it up. |
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Re: AGONY INSIDE ME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 07:31:49 AM AEST (User
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Kittiekat, I don't know if this will help but one of my grandaughters (aged 16) has had a lot of difficulties and disappointments (through health problems).
The other day just when I thought she was heading for a real depression (head in hands) she got up and said..........'Oh well that was yesterday' ........
smiled and walked out.
bob
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