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It Hurts
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
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Turn around, pick up the pieces
Lie in bed as the sulphuric tears
Burn a path down your face
Lie there all still cause it hurts to move,
Hurts to breathe, hurts to cry,
Hurts to know your still alive
See no reason to survive
Drink away your feelings
Smoke away your thoughts
Run it over in your head a thousand times
Until its just a nagging ring
It hurts to remember, hurts to forget
Turn around, pick up the pieces
If there's any left
Let a lonely tear slip out
Can't live like this anymore
The anger eats you away
You have to forgive and forget
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Re: It Hurts
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by kittiekat on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:40:04 AM AEST
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this poem was great, i loved how it flowed, and i can relate to it too, how it feels to be hurt, etc. good write,well, keep up with the great work, see ya
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by kittiekat on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:40:28 AM AEST
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this poem was great, i loved how it flowed, and i can relate to it too, how it feels to be hurt, etc. good write,well, keep up with the great work, see ya
>^..^< |
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Re: It Hurts
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by kittiekat on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:40:56 AM AEST
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this poem was great, i loved how it flowed, and i can relate to it too, how it feels to be hurt, etc. good write,well, keep up with the great work, see ya
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Re: It Hurts
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by kittiekat on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:41:26 AM AEST
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this poem was great, i loved how it flowed, and i can relate to it too, how it feels to be hurt, etc. good write,well, keep up with the great work, see ya
>^..^< |
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Re: It Hurts
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by kittiekat on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 04:44:00 AM AEST
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WHOA. IM SOO SORRIE!! lol
...it was lagging and i didnt know if it was loading...or not working. sorrie again ;X |
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Re: It Hurts
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 05:23:47 AM AEST
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Dear Bobo I really enjoyed your poem! The thoughts behind it were so true. If you don''f forgive it's like poison to your bones....eventually it will eat you up inside.....and you are just picking up where the person that hurt you left off! You can not forget....we are only human...only God can forget...but don't make yourself a slave to that person....and you will unless you forgive!
I like the words you used....very good poem indeed!
lovingcritters
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Re: It Hurts
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 05:58:37 AM AEST
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Im totally in agreeance with Connie*how could I not be ..such a wise woman*..
You have expressed the real feelings of real pain.An excellent yet sad..yet very real look into "hurt".. :) |
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Re: It Hurts
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 08:23:15 AM AEST
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i've been beaten black and blue
been raped by more than a few
i refuse to eat and i dont sleep
behind my smile i do weep
the pain tears me up inside
theres no where i can hide
in my home its my dad
rapes me beats me when he is mad
outside its just some guy
beats me rapes me leaves me to die
yes the "anger eats me away"
my entire life ive been afraid
its not so easy to forget
even harder to forgive
do you have any idea how hard
it is just to live
ill NEVER FORGET
NEVER FORGIVE |
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Re: It Hurts
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 09:02:09 AM AEST
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| Very wise words ... this is just how it feels when you are hurting ... it would be so nice to be able to forgive and forget. Great poem... Jan |
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Re: It Hurts
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 09:46:58 AM AEST
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you capture these feelings very well. I know forgiveness is the key but there is just a certain person that forgiveness comes not. Its hard to forgive or forget when there are daily remeinders of the transgressions. Good write just the same.Im still working on it thanks for reminding me.
Michelle |
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Re: It Hurts
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 12:56:13 PM AEST
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| a very good poem on what we should do, but it is very hard to forgive and forget... i dont know if i ever will be able too... however... a message for those who have gone through this... you arent alone, and although u may never be able to forgive and forget, you can at least try to work past it... a great write bobo... u are an awsome poet ~Apryl |
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Re: It Hurts
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:22:13 PM AEST
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great job bobo, a lot of people can relate to this poem. though for a lot of people it's not easy at all to "forgive and forget" you can still get stronger and move on through all the pain.
awesome write, i enjoyed this one a lot |
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Re: It Hurts
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:57:15 PM AEST
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This poem touched me Bobo, fore I have been torn apart by a woman, beaten up, and totally ripped into pieces, so I wrote a poem called Why Wont You Die. By I feel fore those woman that have been raped, beaten and forgotten, to all the women I say sorry for what thoses evil men have done. But know this not all men are that way, and I pray you will recieve the love you deserve someday.
The Phantom
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Re: It Hurts
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by Chanti on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 02:32:46 PM AEST
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Joel,
Its amazing how you've captured every feeling so perfectly and made it such a beautiful, but sad, write. Every single word holds so much truth. |
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Re: It Hurts
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 05:05:51 PM AEST
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Hey Joel, I have forgiven but shall never forget. Even if my ex and I are no longer together we're still great friends, and no matter how depressed I can get reminiscing on the times we had spent together still can sometimes make me smile. I especially loved the line 'Hurts to breathe, hurts to cry,
Hurts to know your still alive' Yet another great write. Loved it
*_-Psych-_* |
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Re: It Hurts
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by Crow on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:00:46 PM AEST
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I`ve lived right here in these words.
excellent write, Crow |
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Re: It Hurts
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 05:40:30 PM AEST
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joel this is amazing, as always, and so true..
x_x_x |
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Re: It Hurts
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:51:19 AM AEST
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A wise old head on young shoulders. Life is like a long sea journey. The boat gets damaged by the wind, sea and shore. You have two choices.........repair it and sail on .....
or do nothing and sink.
bob
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Re: It Hurts
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by Rain on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 09:36:15 AM AEST
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its agood poem and a nice idea to forget all thats been done but sometimes as the pain dies away the memories still remain unable to be forgotten like torns waiting to be walked on to cause you a little more pain through remembering. but a good poem none the less.
~sara~ |
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