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The Call (of the Wind)
Contributed by
Damaged
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Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In the distance
I hear a cry carried in the wind
The wind brushes through my hair
The message soaks into me
Like the ocean
Up above me
I see an eagle soaring high
His scream is carried by the wind
His scream pierces my soul
Like the thunder
Down below me
The grass sways in the wind
The rustling causes the wind to stir
The feeling overwhelms me - I want to dance
Like the majestic mountains
In the distance
I hear a cry carried in the wind
The wind brushes through my hair
The message soaks into me
It is the call
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Re: The Call (of the Wind)
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by Saira on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 04:32:54 PM AEST
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Welcome Damaged!
This is a beautiful write. Especailly I liked the line...
'...-I want to dance
Like the majestic mountains'
Very good work!
Saira
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Re: The Call (of the Wind)
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 06:16:56 PM AEST
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welcome....
this is a really good write....very beautiful yet a tinge of sadness.....i'd like to hear your views about ILOP sometime.....look forward to more!!! |
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