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For All You Didn't Do
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Your faithless words leave me so cold
As who you really are unfolds
Through all the things you told
You've got me feeling so tired now
I'll show you you were wrong somehow
And that's my solemn vow
Why am I never good enough?
Why can't you just believe in me?
Why don't you see the love that shines
Between us two and let it be?
I'm doing something with my life
Your words, they cut me like a knife
But I will be his wife
And there won't ever be a day
That I come crawling back your way
You're pushing me away
You act like I'm incompetent
And you keep telling me I'll fail
Saying that I'm going nowhere
I guess your love is all for sale
You'll never see the wounds inside
But know damn well you put them there
Don't ever put me down again
Go wash your hands of my despair
You could wait for me forever
I hope it tears you up inside
To realize just how wrong you were
And wonder if you should have tried
You could have been there for me -
But you weren't.
You could have supported me -
But you didn't.
So for all you didn't do
I say **** YOU
And for all the messed up **** you did
Farewell I bid
You'll see you were wrong
And I'll never be like you
So for now, so long
'Cause I'll be happier than you
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MoonlitAngel
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2003-08-19 06:05:00]
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Re: For All You Didn't Do
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 07:41:31 AM AEST
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| unfortunatly, or maybe fortunatly, life doesnt come with a map nor instructions, so the best is to always follow your heart, hey, works for me lol; dee this is so honest and heartfelt a poem, you know im behind you kid *wink* big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: For All You Didn't Do
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 09:17:51 AM AEST
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This hurts to read :o( Very beautifully expressed Angel...
Saira |
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Re: For All You Didn't Do
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by Zee on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 04:56:46 PM AEST
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U got it right on the raw Areas very Accurately!
Justice done with the words for the injustice caused to u! Good Write!! |
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Re: For All You Didn't Do
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by Emmie74 on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 05:39:18 AM AEST
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| They'll find out they were wrong. All you can do, is wait for that day. |
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Re: For All You Didn't Do
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 06:53:57 PM AEST
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your poem is so full of pain - with the frictiion that festers betweeen parent and child sometimes - good write
well i was a daughter and remember being 18 (just barely) and my parents hated the man i eventually ended up marrying - my mother put me thru hell - long story.
And then as a mother - see i told you it was a long story - i promised to stand by my kids no matter what and i try to live by that and be there for them - even now that they are all grown up - i figure i'll need to live with them in a few years - lol - sometimes time heals these riffs - i'm sure they only want the best for you and are having trouble communicating that. keep the doors open and maybe love and understanding will come back in
un beso
merry
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