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arms of a stranger
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when time has come,
and dusks real low.
in his loving arms ,
i yearn to go.
his eyes of a deep,
carressing care.
our night of love,
in passion so fair.
our arms embraced,
this love so true.
in ever lasting love,
i'll go with you.
our love's beyond ,
passion so fair.
in the arms of a stranger,
with passion to share.
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2003-08-19 18:35:00]
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Re: arms of a stranger
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by krystal on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 10:29:29 AM AEST
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freda this is so lovely and the simplicity of your poem made me feel even more vulnerable to the feelings held within it. This is great and I really enjoyed it...Keep up the good work!
Krystal :) |
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