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Your chance
Contributed by
gogrl
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Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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How can I help,
what can I do,
to take your pain
and make you new?
I see your suffering,
I hear your cries,
louder with each moon rise.
Your chance for happiness
slipping away,
losing your grip,
visions of mortality betrayed.
Time seems evil,
as seconds tick by,
in silent mockery,
and endless supply.
But tomorrow will come,
and each day thereafter,
you will find yourself stronger,
and give way to the laughter.
Take not to heart the difficult times,
and realize that in life sometimes,
success is an option,
only after defeat,
it is then you must stand,
rather than retreat.
Today is a new day,
darkness absorbed,
liberated from failure,
your chance is restored.
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gogrl
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2003-08-21 00:05:00]
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Re: Your chance
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 11:19:54 PM AEST
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| nice of you to write this gogrl... :) |
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Re: Your chance
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by gogrl on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 10:13:18 PM AEST
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Thanks girl. I just read like 4 really sad poems in a row and reminded me of when I was younger. I couldn't shake it so I had to say something. It's not a great write but it sincerely came from the heart.
Have a great weekend... |
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Re: Your chance
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:35:25 AM AEST
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| Inspiring.. a nice poem. seen your comment on one of my poems.. thank you. venkat |
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