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The Rush Of The Ice
Contributed by
Doughboy
on
Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ice, teetering on the ridge of existence,
Held only by a single, fragile force
This force, a youth, cries out,
It thinks, in its mind, I am enclosed,
Enclosed in the widest cavity imaginable
Black as pitch,
Voices encircle mind, hounding,
Screaming, whispers harsh.
Until a light,
One light,
One soft voice,
One love,
A love that gives hope,
Transports it to its originals.
Builds it up.
But what if that love was to give way?
Deciding,
The final straw,
The rush of the ice
Copyright ©
Doughboy
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2003-08-21 08:05:00]
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Re: The Rush Of The Ice
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:11:47 PM AEST
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This is very well penned Dough, although I have a different philosophy. Eternal optimist.
No dire predictions. True love is sunny and lasting.
Enjoyed your poem!
Have a great weekend!
Elizabeth |
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