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Suicide Struggle
Contributed by
squeesh
on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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He listened
Only to hear her hidden sobs
Trying to get to her
To help as best he could
Searching looking
lost completely
Locked out he searched
For someway to get in
Her musuc blaired
He knew something had to be wrong
Finally getting to her
The struggle nearly ended
With tears of blood
Running down her cheeks
He slowly swallowed his fear
And approached her shaking and pale
She had her plan in her head
And no one could stop her now
He grabbed for the knife
That she quickly brouth to her throat
At the site of his scared face
In the struggle and shaking bodies
A death accured
His head nearly sheard off
And his twictching body layed on the floor
Falling next to his
In a pile of mised blood
AS police came upon the scene
All they found
Was a suicide note used by two
Copyright ©
squeesh
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2003-08-22 03:05:00]
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Re: Suicide Struggle
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 09:06:49 AM AEST
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| you kept me on the edge.....shocking...... i like that!!! |
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