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Gateway drug
Contributed by
squeesh
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Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
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It all starts off the same
Feeling sorry for yourself
And wanting to escape
The harsh relm of reality
You toke the weed
It gets you high as the sky
But it looses it's thrill
Next thing you know
You addicted to cocain
And there's no way aroudn the rest
You don't look for them
They always find you
In a blink of the eye
You're locked up in jail
For having sex for crack
You lost weight
And made scenes
Craving all there gloosome highs
All because of your selfishness
And the hate you bottled up inside
Copyright ©
squeesh
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2003-08-22 04:05:00]
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Re: Gateway drug
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by jaeann on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 09:12:47 AM AEST
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ya know.....you're good!!!! nah! i don't really like the title....only because of the connotations it elicits....backwards people with closed monds.....but i like the set up .....the spiraling out of control.....not BECAUSE of he use but in spite of........"and made scenes"....
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Re: Gateway drug
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:46:49 PM AEST
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i think this is a great write...it explains really well how things start off innocent enough then in a blink of an eye your whole life can get turned upside down...
amazing job...
~percursors... |
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