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Down In The Pit
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
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Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
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I'm free down in the pit
Release me unto a million blows
In here we all throw a fit
So fast the chaos and panic grows
Spinning webs to catch decay
Circle around to escape ourselves
We fall down tangled in pain
Trampled, broken, and bruised as hell
Comfort gives way to wild
Who says that peace is mild
The flames are kissing my flesh
I feel the blisters are bubbling
They pus up, pop, and peel
Then heal again for new suffering
This eternal bath does not cleanse
I melt away into everything
A puddle left at the feet
Of the one who has nothing
We sway, the crowd goes wild
For today we're born hell's child
Freedom sits
Down in the pit
Down in the pit
Down in the pit
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2003-08-22 07:05:00]
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Re: Down In The Pit
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 10:29:14 PM AEST
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| Hi, Jason. Your poem is very discriptive and unsettling. I don't want the pit or that kind of freedom. You do a fine job of writing. I will be back to read your other poems. Bizzy |
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Re: Down In The Pit
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by Saira on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 10:34:32 PM AEST
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The starting eight lines are great...I liked it. Good work!
Saira |
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