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God's Eyes
Contributed by
isaiyan
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Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the whole number system is screwed.
You know that.
I'm in the middle.
Surrounding me is the dirt of your death and my infamous treachery.
Laugh with me in smiles.
And I do, deny my self-committing
God's eyes plastered to the walls
admist the bubble gum wrappers and doubts
in my past i put my thoughts.
cry with me in sobs.
Copyright ©
isaiyan
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2003-08-22 18:25:00]
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Re: God's Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 02:07:01 AM AEST
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This was very good although it needed to be longer. Its to be more ppl didn't read this. Keep on writing.
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