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Dad, You're Such a Loser
Contributed by
pretty_n_pink
on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dad, you're such a loser
Dad, you were with me
at the time of my birth.
you said you wanted me
and you helped bring me to this earth.
Why'd you want me then
if you don't want me now?
i don't think i can forgive you
there's no way how.
When i grew up
the times got worse
and you'd come home drunk
and start to curse.
Hurtful words in my ears
scars upon my arms and knees
you were supposed to be my protector
of all you're doing to me.
Daddy's little girl at one time
scum of the earth next.
can't you see the pain you've caused me?
look in my eyes and the pain reflects.
Well, now this pain's gonna end
wether you like it or not
and this is for all the times that you said
"sorry, i just forgot."
Well, whenever you die
it will be so swell!
Cuz there's a spot just for you,
and it's waiting for you in HELL!!!
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pretty_n_pink
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2003-08-23 12:05:00]
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Re: Dad, You're Such a Loser
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by crimson_purity on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 08:16:54 PM AEST
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| I love this poem so much, it's not over complicated, but so effective, it really moved me and brought back some harsh memories. Thank you. |
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Re: Dad, You're Such a Loser
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 10:12:52 AM AEST
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| the way this is written is good the way verses 4 -6 get slightly longer then return to the same as the first verse in the last verse, that really emphasises the HELL!!! point. |
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