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Contributed by
k8til_E
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Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
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I've been pushed to the edge and I am about to fall over I amsick of what feelings can be no longer do I try to be happy I could give a ***** if I die today or about what other forms of harm that may come my way I don't give a ***** about grades or records on how I behave It's nobody's business stay the ***** out of my business I don't know what I really want my past has my future to haunt my future don't look to good from where I am standing all those damn people to over demanding It's all my business and please don't correct me if there is someting i miss just sit there don't mistake me for something Im not or ill get *****' more ***** and oh yes there is you come straight out of the blue and you expect me to give a ***** about you?well I am sick of not only you but everything you have to say too. and stay out of my business to all of you I say the same it's my life so leave me and I'll have one less pain I still don't know what I want anymore sadness just another timless bore shows up goes away just sit and have to pray it won't ***** have to stay what's up with peoples attitudes? Don't it bother them to be rude to exclude? What's up with your ***** attitude never had a problem with you infact hardly even spoke to you Even though everything seems alright why must we still ***** and fight why must I stay up late at night to listen to your garbage and there i go slipped over the edge.
There ain't answers to all of my questionsbut no fear i have no more worries to be sloved or to be found my lifes over I've hit the ground.
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Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 08:48:09 PM AEST
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| I really felt the raw emotion, the structure is really interesting and just adds to the overall power of the piece, I really enjoyed it. |
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