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Visually raped
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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Fooled, handcuffed
And driven by pride
My life lay beside me
But I m blind!
Deep wounds in my mind
Plenty of ruins in my heart
Down to earth!
Crawling creeping
Stabbed by a knife
The ocean of tears
Feels so wide
The smoke of my blood
Reached the sky
Far away from my veins to die
Your eyes taped the moment
By a glimpse
Silent and cold u left
One hand I could raise to be saved
You looked smiled .
And Ive been raped
Raped
Visually raped.
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cant-skate
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2003-08-24 05:05:00]
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Re: Visually raped
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by crimson_purity on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 09:29:26 PM AEST
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| Oh I like this a lot "The smoke of my blood"-quality line, and the idea of visual rape is so intriguing. |
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Re: Visually raped
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 08:46:56 PM AEST
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Wow this was very vivid and shocking. The title really grabbed my attention. Great write.
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