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On ur gates
Contributed by
cant-skate
on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Snowflakes caressing
My warm body
Crows singing the song that
I had wrote to you
Clouds watching me
And rain drops
Falling everywhere
I was satisfied, I felt
Dissolving in the air
I felt gone!
I saw the soul
Melting into sand
I saw lightning charging up
From a candle
Angles, angles
Thats a sign!
I may know where I am
This is heaven
Or maybe the edge of your bed!
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2003-08-24 06:05:00]
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Re: On ur gates
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by MrMcBiggums on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 03:13:23 PM AEST
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| I really like this one a lot. Especially the ending. Especially the ending... |
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