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Stillness
Contributed by
sylph
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Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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White lilies were there
A few red roses as well
Calmness pervaded all
Whispering voices echoed
There lay someone in dark
Stillness saturated him
Aura of innocence was still there
Cloaked in that stationary form
In a robe of some hue
Did anyone realize that?
Who cares? Who knows?
Why should we bother?
We are important, right?
There is no time to stand n stare!
Copyright ©
sylph
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2003-08-24 06:45:00]
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Re: Stillness
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 07:44:40 AM AEST
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Profound Slyph....too late....you poem echoes with talent...I felt so many emotions in your questions Slyph....so very true....Stillness, and yet who cares, why bother, the attitude of today. Complete Apathy....as long as it's not happening to me I can't feel any pain.
This was an excellent write....I'm looking for ward to reading many more of yours....Thought provoking with fellow feeling. Wonderful indeed!
lovingcritters
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Re: Stillness
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 07:57:00 PM AEST
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| your first four lines captured me, lovely poem, and warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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