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don't fall in love with a smiley face
Contributed by
painted_echos
on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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met him in a room, in a crowded room
was gonna leave, but he said hi
then he winked at me, and i delclare
that lil yellow face caught my eye
dont loose your heart to a smiley face
no matter what he promises you
dont loose your heart to a smiley face
cause yellow smiles leave tears of blue
he asked whats up, said i was bored
he winked and said, wanna play
whats the game i asked, im new to this
grinning wide, he said, i'll teach ya babe
we talked for hours, becoming friends
the yellow guy was smart and fast
moved me in ways id never known
i shouldve seen, it wouldnt last
dont loose your heart to a smiley face
no matter what he promises you
dont loose your heart to a smiley face
cause yellow smiles leave tears of blue
then one fall day, it all went dark
old yeller was gone, just like that
now every smile reminds me of him
and the game that he playedwink and scat
no dont go falling for a sweet talkin smiley face
and be fooled into thinking hes true
that big yellow grin may be hard to resist
in the end hon, hell just leave ya blue
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Re: don't fall in love with a smiley face
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 05:18:36 AM AEST
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Great write, Painted_echos.... and good advice too...
Jenni |
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Re: don't fall in love with a smiley face
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 09:36:27 AM AEST
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| this is a really good poem well written the smiley face is stuck in my brain now in a disturbing way 0.o |
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Re: don't fall in love with a smiley face
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 04:30:10 PM AEST
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| this poem is great! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: don't fall in love with a smiley face
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:00:32 PM AEST
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| so true painted_echos. Love this. |
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Re: don't fall in love with a smiley face
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 01:23:54 AM AEST
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| oh wow....this is good....i loved it....reminds me of my own in "Uh Oh!".....the games people play.....great write |
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Re: don't fall in love with a smiley face
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by Crow on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 02:35:08 PM AEST
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| been there, ain`t going back! i like this piece very good write. Crow |
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