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I Never Cried
Contributed by
blackfire9786
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Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 10:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The flowers fall from her hand
In slow motion she falls to the floor
I cannot move my eyes from her white face
Her empty eyes, where she lingers no more
Memories coming back of my life with her
Remembering all the times she cried
I remember how much I yelled and fought with her
How its so wrong, so unfair, how she died.
The man standing over her body
Laughing, waiting for the tears to come
Waiting, needing to see us suffer
But I wont let him have his sick fun
I look up into his wild face
Look straight into his insane eyes
Youre days are numbered, now,
Youre gonna die
He laughs until his sides hurt
He closes his eyes and theres my chance
The knife slowly goes into his stomach
And he breathes his last.
I sit and held my sisters body
Next to it I lie
My father never got what he wanted
For one tear, I never cried.
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Re: I Never Cried
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:05:03 PM AEST
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| good write. Ivy |
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Re: I Never Cried
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by painted_echos on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 06:47:43 PM AEST
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| perhaps you never cried...the reader will. for me, this poem conveys grief beyond tears. |
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Re: I Never Cried
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 02:22:16 AM AEST
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| the pain and the grief in this piece is so telling...i see innocence ripped away right before my eyes...keep writing..... |
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