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Satan's Temptation
Contributed by
blackfire9786
on
Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I will deceive you with my lies
Follow me into the fire
I will arrange your demise
Make insatiable you every desire
I will pull you to the depths of hell
But dont worry, itll be fun
Youll get to burn and be tortured by me
Youll never see the light of the sun.
Follow my seductive temptation
Follow my path of sin
You know the idea lures you
Just dont think about what Ill do to your wife and children
Though most people would be frightened
Of taking the path Ive described
But you know youre brave
You have the desire, I see it in your eyes.
You know the dark powers of the Universe
Arent easy to resist
You know you deserve what youll get in hell
Do you want to live for eternity knowing
While others are tortured, you got out of your punishment?
As you come onto my path
And scream for God from the horrible screeches and cries
You cant blame anyone but yourself
I told you Id deceive you with my lies.
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Re: Satan's Temptation
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 06:16:03 AM AEST
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This is powerful and very well written. I don't really knowwhat else to say except I hope you aren't following his path and keep writing like this!
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Re: Satan's Temptation
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:13:20 AM AEST
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| this is a very intense piece...really really good!!! |
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