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Magical garden
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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In the magical garden, surrounded with trees
a girl with blue eyes is walking,
She is enchanted by green grass
astonished by flowers, and she smiles
she feels so free and would like to fly
but she has no wings, although feels like butterfly
Softly, thinking she is in paradise,
she touches every plant, like they were made of glass....
Deeply breathing, smelling the fresh air
closes her eyes, she is impressed
she sees the metal tree
it is like the fountain
so she stands under it
and water is showering her body
how refreshing
when the drops are touching
every part of her
and behind the water veil
smiling, blueeyes girl...
Amazed when she sees the steps
runs up and down and
everywhere she comes
she feels the world in her palms
She lies down in the grass
her head on soft pillow - she can relax
tall trees around
the birds singing so loud
the nature whispering in her ear,
"relax, girl, as long as you are here"....
Every tree, every plant
waves at her - she still smiles
she feels this life
which fullfills her soul
she is the little one in huge garden
So Satisfied.
Full of impression, full of love
she acquired the the magical garden in her heart
once and for eternity
this garden in her living
became a shrine of her soul
if you meet this girl sometimes
you will surely see in her eyes
the blue colour of the skies
and a free being,
happily running
in her magical garden of paradise....
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-08-26 23:05:00]
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Re: Magical garden
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 11:25:49 PM AEST
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what a lovely picture you painted...sounds like a wonderful place
Shari |
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Re: Magical garden
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 02:05:47 AM AEST
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| very beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Magical garden
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 06:25:35 AM AEST
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| Wonderful Aika, you captured the magic of the place.I'm glad it left you with wonderful memories........I don't think that garden could be complete without you now :) |
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