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First Kiss
Contributed by
princesspage
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Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The time is not important and the scene is composed
Hidden behind a cluster trees so not to be exposed
His arm gripped around my waist
In such a raw yet tender embrace
Twisting his finger around a strand of my hair
Looking at me for some sentiment to share
His eyes taking in my red satin dress
Then taking my hand twirls me round with finesse
Then smiles and laughs and whispers my name
I become breathless, as he tells me his aim.
I see his mouth form the word of kiss
As his eyes become a deep abyss
Now its all still, the breeze, the air, my heart
As he waits for my response to part
Then pulls me in close without any dispute
Then reaps the rewards of his endless pursuit
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2003-08-27 01:45:00]
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Re: First Kiss
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 05:39:47 AM AEST
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Awww Princess, this is so lovely..thanks for sharing it.. I remember my first kiss... I said to myself....IS THAT WHAT GIRLS MAKE ALL THAT FUSS ABOUT?? ha!! But..the second one a few moments later made me see what the fuss was about... :>)
Loved this..
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Re: First Kiss
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 03:18:27 PM AEST
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| What a lovely experience beautifully told. (bit of a contrast to mine, same title) |
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Re: First Kiss
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 12:38:01 AM AEST
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| wow that was spectacular...i loved it. your words were flowing together as i read it...good job keep writing |
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