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self evaluation
Contributed by
joe
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Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Life is ***** me up
Life is breaking me down
I feel Like giving up
My demons cry out
Inside I am crying
Inside I am dying
The voice in my head
Tells me it wants me dead
It wants me to turn
it needs me to learn
I feel this hate inside
And can't believe the good has died
I am going insane
Only myself can I blame
Don't know what I should
I feel so damn confused
So don't try to push your luck
'Cause right now I'm all ***** up
Don't know what is left of me
Cannot see or breath
Cannot stand or walk
My mouth is numb, can't talk
i feel like I have no soul
I set it free as my death unfolds
Into a bloody haze
As my life flashes, and I re-live better days
i'm wishing it were all a dream
or maybe, if only I could be set free
Copyright ©
joe
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2003-08-28 05:05:00]
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Re: self evaluation
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by SublimeButterfly on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 05:50:16 AM AEST
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Well said - good poem.
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