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in your eyes
Contributed by
wassim
on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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can't get enough of you
saying that you are totaly thrue
wanna go deeper then we do
our love have allways beng true
when i belived in the truth
this new feeling so passioned
full every phenominal in my heart with the yuth
a thousand life beng gratfulled
from the day i was weak and called
stuck in this shadow out of love
till your eyes reach out above
to the road out of my rain
to another portal to the vain
from fantasy to reality
stuck out to the passions
the mind quicker then the eye i feel so clumsy
from every step of live needs emotions
hard to breath and hard to see
still your feelings needs some cautions
your my sol mate my lovley
reunite with a new love when it opens
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wassim
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2003-08-28 09:05:00]
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Re: in your eyes
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:03:53 PM AEST
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still your feelings needs some cautions....
awesome line!!!!
very heartfelt piece!!! |
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