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Unfaithful
Contributed by
Aika
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Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my friend, has just told me that he was unfaithful
after all those years his inside world is no more that pure
i told him that it was pretty bad but on the contrary we are alive to live
and to be faithful since the first day for long long years is like never try: to drink or smoke to drive fast or be coarse to touch gold if you do not have money to be bought
he tried, I said do not be worried hide inside your lil secret and live like you lived before cos you never know if all around are really honest and do not also hide the lil secret if you want, repeat it and change your life if do not want, hide it deep in your mind....
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Aika
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2003-08-29 07:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unfaithful
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 10:45:54 AM AEST (User
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i like your advice......
good write............ |
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Re: Unfaithful
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:01:38 PM AEST (User
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Lovely write...Aika...you can hide it in your mind, but what about your soul?
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Re: Unfaithful
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:27:15 AM AEST (User
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a wonderful poem, full of interesting thoughts and attitudes, paul |
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