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The change
Contributed by
LaFLesh
on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The change came
In spite of passing the time
In comforting ignorance.
Where I secretly wish crimes
Were only cold whispers in the dark
Where I hold the power
To keep the sheets over my face,
The pain constantly hidden there
In desperate longings for perfection.
Blinding me from the truth.
Thankfully.
But its no wonder
Im still alive.
It is sheer determination
That gets me through today
Where hope means knowing that
All is well
Regardless of past promises, broken.
Some will not make it
This time around
But some of us will, I hope.
This truth is my own, I belong to it.
I freely delegate this responsibility
To myself, mindfully deciding
My own fate
With perfect timing.
Copyright ©
LaFLesh
... [
2003-08-29 12:05:00]
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Re: The change
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 02:45:02 PM AEST
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| Excellent. I love the end. |
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Re: The change
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 09:37:20 PM AEST
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| beautiful chiquita~~~ |
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Re: The change
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by reason on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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| very deep thoughts. i had to read it couple of times to understand it at least from my view. still i liked it :) |
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