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The senses of Love
Contributed by
Katie-Kate
on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish you would share your thoughts with me
I wish you would share your love
I wish I knew all about you
I wish on the stars above
I know that we are quite a pair
I know my love is real
I know that things can't be this way
I know you can't return what i feel
I hear the sound of your voice in my sleep
I hear the revs fo your car
I hear my heart pounding when I see you
I hear, but you're just too far
I smell your leather jacket
I smell my love for you
I smell your warm breath
I smell the scent that is you
I feel myself falling
I feel my feet hit the ground
I feel my heart break for you
I feel, but no longer hear a sound
I watch you as you aproach
I watch the way you walk
I watch each and every move you make
I watch you when your talk
I reflect of moments spent with you
I reflect on what you say
I reflect of my approach to you
I reflect upon each day
i tell you that i think of you
I tell you how I feel
I tell you that my heart aches
I tell you, that this wont heal
So know how much I love you
So hear the words I say
So feel the sincerety of my heart
So watch me break when you walk away.
Copyright ©
Katie-Kate
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2003-08-29 18:05:00]
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Re: The senses of Love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:08:32 PM AEST
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Love the last line! Very effective end - great job!
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Re: The senses of Love
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 04:52:55 AM AEST
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| this is dark, but love... interresting and great writing. |
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