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Wrong
Contributed by
daniel
on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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righteous recreation of what you haven't in awhile
like piecing in the pieces minor to a pedophile
while i'm watching on it's so wrong as you smile
the misplacement misdirected adjacent to denial
LIAR! COME AGAIN!
wait for it to come back over again
FIRED! ONCE AGAIN!
move on up and out and do it again
we're crossing in paths, down in our back alley ways
something we never dreamed of before...
chancing unknown extracts, piling a stack over days
a course in this course still abhorred...
let's keep in mind the risk already made
enter this time skip the fiscal ply gates
nothing to show for now you know you hide
what can you go for with those ones inside
inside...
stifling recreation of what you haven't in a week
like piecing in the pictures major to a cheek
teary eyed watch on it's wrong but not so bleak
this misarranged astranged deranged man made meek
LIAR! COME AGAIN!
wait for it to come back over again
FIRED! ONCE AGAIN!
move on up and out and do it again
run out of the door, just like before in good times
this time isn't cake walking games...
different with more, whatever for and whatever finds
can we say now we stop with the games...
let's keep behind the risk already made
forget this time in the fiscal ply gates
all things to show for you know you mind
what can you go for with those ones behind
behind...
crashing technicalities of what you'll never face
put them through the system for a stranger's grace
want to watch on but it's wrong and in slow pace
no miscalculations christened in this little chace
will it ever be right again?
LIAR! COME AGAIN!
wait for it to come back over again
FIRED! ONCE AGAIN!
move on up and out and do it again
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-08-30 03:45:00]
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Re: Wrong
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 04:00:02 AM AEST
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| Your frustrations came through like a fireball out of a volcano. Mindblowing.2 thumbs up! |
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Re: Wrong
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 07:35:07 PM AEST
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Hey Danny,
Awesome write... it's really powerful.
Hope you didn't really get fired.
And yeah.... whatever's wrong will
be right again. :)
Catch ya laters,
~Dani~
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