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As the Angels Watch Silently...
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
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Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The satin fabric flows gently,
The wings of the dove,
The passages of time eat away,
As the angels watch silently from above...
Brother pitted against brother,
Father, against son,
And mother against father,
As the moon hides from the sun...
The end is creeping nearer,
As we forget the meaning of love,
And the heavens begin to weep for peace,
As the angels watch silently from above...
And time will lose all meaning,
The hawk will out-fly the dove,
And fear shall strike the hearts of men,
As the angels, weep quietly for love...
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Re: As the Angels Watch Silently...
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by Saira on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 08:00:07 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. I liked it!
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Re: As the Angels Watch Silently...
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by painted_echos on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 09:08:26 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful, sadly beautiful...thank you. |
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Re: As the Angels Watch Silently...
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 02:48:40 PM AEST
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sad, but i think there may be some truth behind that.. well done, good write
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Re: As the Angels Watch Silently...
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:59:03 PM AEST
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Ravenblack,
I want you to know that this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. The ending was just perfectly said. Set the whole poem up and then the emotionally climax, and what a thrilling poem you just wrote. "As the angels weep quietly for love, but there is none to be found...and that Ravenblack is why the end will come...before man completely destroys himself.
I'm going to print this one out! Beautifully done!
lovingcritters
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Re: As the Angels Watch Silently...
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:17:05 PM AEST
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| Beautifuland eleagnt in its sorrow...Gorgeous!!! |
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Re: As the Angels Watch Silently...
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:51:04 PM AEST
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| very pretty, a great write. i love the symbalance of the hawk and dove |
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